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    These are killer. You obviously know what you're doing in terms of shot composition, the placement of characters and objects in a scene etc. etc. and the depth blur is great in some of these. However, much like what has already been said, I feel there's room for improvement regarding the lines, layering and the white spaces around each outline. It's an easy fix, though - once you learn how to use layer blend modes and different widths of pens and such (sorry for assuming you don't know these things- I may be wrong) then these pics will totally rule. But these are minor things - I'm looking forward to seeing more. I've nothing to say about the story and characters other than I love it all. Keep it up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Renjo View Post
    These are killer. You obviously know what you're doing in terms of shot composition, the placement of characters and objects in a scene etc. etc. and the depth blur is great in some of these. However, much like what has already been said, I feel there's room for improvement regarding the lines, layering and the white spaces around each outline. It's an easy fix, though - once you learn how to use layer blend modes and different widths of pens and such (sorry for assuming you don't know these things- I may be wrong) then these pics will totally rule. But these are minor things - I'm looking forward to seeing more. I've nothing to say about the story and characters other than I love it all. Keep it up!
    I am not offended at all. What you assumed is true..Photoshop is a great tool--and I am still learning how to use all the functions. I welcome all criticisms and/or praise. I appreciate your comments, and anyone who takes the time to check out the web series.


    Any advice on how to fix my line, spaces and white areas please share. I am basically learning as I go.

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    Cool stuff Excelsior. Getting better all the time

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ghost View Post
    Cool stuff Excelsior. Getting better all the time
    Thanks to the advice in your comic tips thread. I really appreciate you sharing the knowledge. I intend to pay it forward.
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    I redid the first two pages to explain the origin of the comic universe-within the comic aspect of war dogz. The first being the comic War Dogz--anthropomorphic tale of canine mercenaries, and the other being that of Abernathy, lowly janitor who unwittingly frees 4 genetically enhanced dogs that improve his life without his knowledge.

    Let me know if I need to clarify this point more..I tried visually clues such as numbering the pages of the comic within the comic while leaving the outside universe pages numberless..etc.




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